Rolling…
Whoosh!
Crash!
A moment of silence
overcome by another…
Rolling…
Whoosh!
Crash!
The breathing earth
both sister and brother
Rolling…
Whoosh!
Crash!
A powerful pulling
from one to the other
Rolling…
Whoosh!
Crash!
A rhythmic lulling
like the touch of a lover
Rolling…
Whoosh!
Crash!
A moment of near silence
denied by another
Rolling…
Whosh!
Crash!
No need to rewrite it. This is good as it is.
Posted by: l-arginine | July 25, 2011 at 08:54 AM
thank you, L-arginine!
Posted by: River | July 28, 2011 at 07:49 AM